What I feel
Would not fit upon
A card
The petals would be
Ashes in the heat
Of my want
The chocolates would
Melt but you could
Suck them in creamy
Gobbets from my fingers
The underwear
Torn into shreds
Your beauty
Makes me rage with
Desire
Because I am
A fucking wolf
And you,
My full moon
Any boy
Can tell you
How they need you
But I would rather
Show you the depth
And fury of
My want
If the force of it
Leaves scars,
I will
Kiss
Them
Better
Wow! Powerful stuff! Thanks for sharing this and Happy VD 🙂
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It was my pleasure. Happy Valentines Day to you too, Jam
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This is my kind of Valentine! I love the part about the petals becoming ashes. That’s hot!
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Just a little creepy–all those guys who assure you that love hurts…..
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We all draw different things from the work. Thank you for commenting.
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My comments are not showing up randomly. I had already commented on this. So weird. WP is really glitchy sometimes. Anyway, I had said that this is my kind of Valentine and that I really like the part about the petals turning to ash. That’s really hot! Very sexy poem, Matt!
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Great work! I loved it. Happy Valentine’s day!
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Thank you. It’s been a while hope that you’ve been well.
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All good, thank you! I am back in grad school. So I am not able to devote as much time as I would’ve liked to WordPress.
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The best reason possible then. What are you studying? Regardless its a pleasure to read your comments again.
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I am an Electrical Engineering student. It is always a pleasure to read your work 🙂
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That’s a great field. In our era it occupies the role that shamans and apothecaries did in earlier civilisations. I’ve read about Tesla and Edison before and how the first piece of science fiction was written by an electrical engineer. Thank you for reading it. The feedback is important to me
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Yeah! It is a very interesting field. Lots of work going on and a lot more to be done! 🙂
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I feel that about literature
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If more men could be this passionate….whew!
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Steamy little number.
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